A bonus, if you can call it that.
Next line: “ it could be worse, I think. Don’t you?”
Hmmmm. Good thought, too many syllables for this style. Maybe I need to break the rules sometimes.
Not sure what style you are seeking….
It’s a form of tanka 5-7-5-7-7 or 5-7-5-7-5 I am still working on it.
Next line: “ it could be worse, I think. Don’t you?”
Hmmmm. Good thought, too many syllables for this style. Maybe I need to break the rules sometimes.
Not sure what style you are seeking….
It’s a form of tanka 5-7-5-7-7 or 5-7-5-7-5 I am still working on it.